Shir I am glad that you have accepted my invitation to visit Carpe Diem, thank you for that and welcome at Carpe Diem a daily haiku meme where we write haiku and share them in our haiku community. I love this haiku/senryu which you've shared here, that twist in the last line is an awesome find. Brought a big smile on my face. My name is Kristjaan Panneman, I write under the penname Chèvrefeuille and I am your host here at Carpe Diem. Hope to see you here again Shir.
That;s the truth!
ReplyDeleteShir I am glad that you have accepted my invitation to visit Carpe Diem, thank you for that and welcome at Carpe Diem a daily haiku meme where we write haiku and share them in our haiku community.
ReplyDeleteI love this haiku/senryu which you've shared here, that twist in the last line is an awesome find. Brought a big smile on my face.
My name is Kristjaan Panneman, I write under the penname Chèvrefeuille and I am your host here at Carpe Diem.
Hope to see you here again Shir.
Namaste
Very nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi